A MEMORY CALLED EMPIRE – Arkady Martine (2019)

A Memory Called EmpireArkady Martine’s debut novel just won the 2020 Hugo and is shortlisted for the Clarke, so indeed, it has all the hallmarks of what people seem to like: a picture of a sprawling throne on the cover, and a “glossary of persons, places and objects” at the end.

There’s much to like in this book, especially a “cunningly plotted” story of palace intrigue centered around the new ambassador of a mining station in the capital city of the galaxy spanning Teixcalaanli empire – an empire that loves literature and poetry, and an empire in the midst of a succession crisis.

So let me be upfront: this was an okay book, a nice book, an entertaining book, a Tor book, and I’d even recommend it if you need your contemporary space opera fix. But at the same time, it was very, very generic. Maybe that calls for a checklist?

A.I. – There’s a mysterious algorithm controlling the city and some of the police, and it is supposed to signify the dystopian side of the empire: controlling how people walk, what they see, what they read. But it’s totally underdeveloped, and a sideshow only. Martine manages to slip in some stuff about bias, as algorithms reflect their creators, but the bias, nor the the A.I. ever has a real influence on what happens in the story, and as such the social commentary is surface level only, and not baked into the story’s blueprint.

ALIENS – The Teixcalaan are human, as are the people from the station. But the book has no ‘ontology’. Are all these people far future descendants of Earthlings in a diaspora that forgot their history? Or are these cultures that exist somewhere in another galaxy of the universe, and coincidentally all happened to evolve with a human biology and human cultural habits? Or does this book take place in Fantasy Land? By the way, there are other aliens too, of the kind that can’t be reasoned with, mentioned in passing only, and waiting in the wings for the second act.

EMPIRE – Indeed, empire. It’s even in the title! What an easy target imperialism has become. Sadly, the Teixcalaanli empire is never menacing, it never shows its teeth. It is supposed to be a remorseless, planet gulping military machine, yet the Emperor is a friendly old man that managed peace for 80 years. The fact that Lesl Station – the home of our protagonist Mahit Dzmare and 30,000 other souls – managed to remain independent for decades only shows that the Teixcalaan aren’t the boogeyman. To Martine’s credit, the book does portray a believable form of cultural imperialism, but it’s seen only through Mahit’s eyes, and as she is a Teixcalanophile that again kinda removes the sting. At the end, I was rooting for the Emperor, and I never felt the opposition between Lesl & Teixcalaan – part of that is the fact that Lesl Station is never fleshed out. The same goes for Teixcalaan: while it does feature the outskirts of the Shiny City & its proletariat once, the book firmly focuses on the elite. As social or political critique it does not work, because Martine seems more fascinated with the Imperial Court and its mother-of-pearl exotica flower inlays.

GENDER – Never mind the puppies! Most characters are female, and there’s some non-heterodox romance. Well done, effortless, never preachy, never showy.

GLOSSARY – Every self-respecting speculative fiction book on a vast, ancient culture needs one, but this one is more marketing than necessary. I consulted it only twice, and even in those two cases I didn’t really need to, had I waited a few pages for clarification. It even has the name of the protagonist, just to point out the level of redundancy it has just to beef up its page count.

INTRIGUE – This could have been a fantasy novel too, as it is 100% palace intrigue – I’ve seen comparisons to The Goblin Emperor. Yes, there’s the imago machine (see technology) – but as that is never scientifically explained, it could have just as easily been written as a magic, ritual possession.

NAMES & LANGUAGE – Obviously an empire uses numbers to form names. The Romans did so too! As did the Borg! And the Aztecs! And they have cool sounding terms for professional occupations: scientists are called ixplanatl, members of the Information Ministry are called asekreta. You get it? Explainers and non-secrets? It kinda wrecks Martine’s efforts to build a believable alien language, as disguised English doesn’t really transport me out of my couch to another world. There’s a poor effort at a guide to pronunciation and writing the Teixcalaanli language after the glossary too, but all the sounds are just basic sounds from English. What’s all the more baffling is that the book only mentions ELEVEN words in Teixcalaanli. Why bother writing a guide at all? Especially as even the Teixcalaanli names are in English entirely!! And although the guide also claims the language spoken on Lsel Station sounds like “Modern Eastern Armenian”, who cares, as there’s even less words of the Lsel Language in the 461 pages. Klingon or Elvish this is not, just a half-assed, lazy attempt at looking like serious scifi. Or a labor of love, as Martine writes in the acknowledgments that she “began this book (…) two weeks into an intensive language course in Modern Eastern Armenian: my head full of shapes of words that weren’t mine.”

SERIES – Yes, of course this is a series! A duology for now. But this first one stands firmly on its own, and it neatly wraps up its story. The finale is actually great.

TECHNOLOGY – The book has jumpgates, and a few space ships, and a city with gates controlled by AI, but as I wrote, it could have been fantasy too, so most of its technology is just set dressing. The book’s one major technological thing is the imago machine, a small brain implant that allows for the memories and experience of another person – normally a deceased predecessor – to merge with a new, younger person. ‘Other memory’ a fixture of science fiction at least since Dune, this particular version reeks of Ninefox Gambit, throws in a bit of the mechanics of Altered Carbon, and references clearly to Dune‘s Abomination as well: it’s not safe for children. It must be said, Martine’s mixing manages to keep things fresh enough, and doesn’t just go down the plagiarism road. For my tastes however, it’s a missed opportunity that she sidesteps the mind-body problem. It’s also rather pulpy that a surgeon of the Nick Riviera kind manages to perform a highly-complex-and-to-her-previously-unknown-brain-operation-involving-alien-technology without training, prep, guide or help.

UNIQUE FEATURE – A book like this has to have a focus, a unique selling point, the thing that makes these aliens or this empire special. For the Teixcalaan it is literature. Their elite just loves poetry, speaks in metric verses to show off & uses it for political scheming. It didn’t rub me the wrong way, but do not expect mind-blowing creativity from the part of Martine either. There’s actually only two instances poetry and politics crossed in the book, and the first time it isn’t even significant for how the story develops, it’s just a poetry slam where one of the contestants uses a poem to utter thinly veiled critique. That’s not cunning plotting to me, that’s just using something Earthlings have done since they started declamating poetry. The second time, our heroes use a poem as a coded message to get out of a pickle. That’s about it. The focus on literature also ties in to the cultural imperialism I mentioned: the empire’s stories (written literature, movies) infatuate those beyond its borders. Sociology 101. For my taste, Martine stresses things too much, just as she feels the need to explicitly spell out the ring composition of the book numerous times. Leave it to the reader to solve the puzzle, I’d say.

For a speculative fiction book where poetry is truly an engine in the story, check out Daniel Abraham’s excellent debut series, the Long Prize Quartet.

One final thing in this regard: Camestros Felapton drew my attention to the fact that the book plays with the “idea of a society that is so obsessed with its own drama”, which “neatly parallels how the genre of space-opera is itself obsessed with empire and in particular the operatic scale of empire. This gives the book a very interesting element of critique of science fiction’s imperial obsession while also indulging in it.” Maybe that’s a valid way of looking at it, and it is surely an interesting thought, but I don’t really buy the “critique” part. A Memory Called Empire never felt critical to me, never sharp for itself, never sharp for the genre. The empire is rather charming, the good guys win, and in the end, Mahit Dzmare is respected and free.

Lists aren’t nuanced. All of the above is too harsh. As I said, I enjoyed this book. It’s generic, yes, but still crisp. Most of the time, I was interested in where the story would take me. Arkady Martine’s prose goes down easy. All that is no small feat. At the same time, the book didn’t challenge me, didn’t challenge my conception of reality, didn’t teach me new things, didn’t make me think, hardly surprised me. That’s okay.

I do want to read A Desolation Called Peace when it comes out in March 2021, but those lurking aliens – real aliens – better be cool, bloodthirsty & illiterate.


Maybe this is the perfect metaphor for the book. Tor’s golden lettering doesn’t withstand even one reading. Visual poetry, if you like.

Faded Memory

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28 responses to “A MEMORY CALLED EMPIRE – Arkady Martine (2019)

  1. Cool review, Bart! I really liked your format for this one. So you enjoyed the author’s style?.. Generic but entertaining?

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  2. Have to agree with Wakizashi above, I did enjoy your format here.
    And fingers crossed for bloodthirsty and illiterate aliens in the next book! 😁

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  3. Wow, I have to say that I giggled at the “it’s a Tor Book” and the golden lettering remark. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    I enjoyed it more than you did but I can definitely understand why you found it so generic, a lot of elements that could have been explored way more are very surface level (I completely agree with the AI, the aliens, the language etc..). I hope the second book will explore those elements more and not treat them as cool superficial features.

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    • Thanks! Yes, it will be interesting to see how Martine will handle a story that’s probably on a bigger canvas, as this ultimately was a small murder mystery set in a small political circle. At the same time I guess she will keep Mahit as the central character, so we might get a similar, smaller story. Anyhow, the potential for a great, much better second book is there, if she dares to write a totally different book, like Leckie did everytime in her debut trilogy. (I’ve seen this compared to Ancillary X, but I think those books are much more harsh & sharp, less cosy.)

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    • (By the way, I did enjoy this book, but it just didn’t live up to the expectations of some 5 star reviews I read.)


  4. Here is where the term ‘speculative’ seems to me to be rather misleading as a catch-all term, when a work like this is neither quite science-fictiony enough nor fantastic either. Maybe ‘space opera’ does come sufficiently close, I suppose. I did like your review though I fear this title doesn’t sound engrossing enough for me to seek it out when I’ve already far too much already to read.

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    • Oh maybe I overstressed it, this is science fiction alright, 100% contemporary space opera.. But I wanted to indicate the things that move the story around aren’t really science fiction per se.

      And yes, I think it’s safe to say – as far as I know you as a reader – that you have other, more pressing concerns…

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  5. Love this review, Bart! I’ll be wading into this one with my eyes open. I really appreciate this format, makes for informative and entertaining read. As for the book, I’ll probably read it, but I’ll have my expectations pared down πŸ˜‰ If you want menacing aliens and AIs, some well-researched tech and not so benevolent empires, give Asher a try. I can’t understand why he doesn’t get awards. But then, awards and their merits or lack thereof is a separate topic entirely.

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    • I got the idea because I saw Maryam of the Curious SFF Reader put a checklist in her review of how this book ticks all the boxes, and then it struck me: that is exactly this book’s problem. And as I was annoyed by the glossary, that quickly led to this format.

      Good that you remind me of Neal Asher, still have to give him a go. What’s his best book that can be read stand alone? Or if he only does series, what’s the best place to start?

      As for awards: I’ve learned not to pay too much attention. There’s too much politics & money involved this day and age.

      Generally, I’ve learned not to expect anything from mainstream SF anymore – to me it seems the genre has slowly crept into marketable produce again, after it tried so hard to become accepted by the literary esthablishment, and as such, in a way, books like these are just today’s escapist pulp, but in disguise & with political veneer.

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      • Unfortunately, I have to agree 100% with you regarding the mainstream SF – political correctness seems to be the word of the decade, with indifference toward what used to form the crux of SF – original ideas and fascinating critique of modern society.

        As for Asher, I think the best starting point is Agent Cormac series – the first book is Gridlinked, and the reviews for the first 4 books are on the blog. I still need to write the review for the last one πŸ˜‰

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        • I think Bookstooge also recommended me Grindlink, so I’ll look out for it, thanks!

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          • I’ll be looking forward to your review – though to be fair, it’s definitely more on the action side and the full plot is slowly uncovered over the five books, with many red herrings along the way πŸ˜‰ Gridlinked is a great entry point, but some of the sequels are even better, as they play out in a fully developed world.


    • Btw, you’ll probably like this more than I did. I think because of my academic background in poetry, I’m way more critical than most people for that side of the story.

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      • What is your academic background, if I may ask? I pegged you on the more scientific side but looks like I was mistaken πŸ˜‰


        • No, I studied linguistics & literature, with a focus on Dutch & English, and in my later years a pretty tight focus on postmodern poetry, and more specifically representation. But to grasp that field in a firm way, you need a pretty broad holistic view of philosophy, art, politics & science, as they obviously all tie into problems of representation.
          Regardless of that, I’ve always had a keen interest in biology & science in general, reading about that for as long as I can remember, maybe that distorts my online persona here a bit. πŸ™‚

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  6. A very thoughtful review, as I’ve come to expect from you πŸ™‚
    Your mention of Dune is interesting because I approached this novel expecting something similar with intrigue and deadly politics and I think this is the main reason I felt a little disappointed, although I enjoyed the story. Bloodthirsty aliens in the second volume will be more than welcome to spice up events, indeed – and I’m still grinning at your request for illiterate ones πŸ˜€
    Thanks for sharing!

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  7. I keep going through phases of really wanting to read this and really not caring for the idea of picking it up. I’m still on the fence.

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  8. I’ve seen both brilliant and terrible reviews for A Memory Called Empire. As you’re respectfully situated in the middle it seems the best basis to go off – an enjoyable but not astonishing read!

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